Catching Up

 I've not written a blog post for several weeks. At first it was because I was so gosh-darn busy. But then my grandson's health emergency called me to drive down to Asheville to be of support. I have not done a road trip for years. Both my daughters emphatically told me it was not safe for someone as old as I am to go on a long car trip by myself. And I more or less agreed. It is true that as you age, many things get less sharp: hearing, reactions, thinking. But this seemed really important so I suddenly decided to drive south and started the next morning. By the time I got to Asheville, three days later (!), I was inclined to agree that my daughters had been right. But I made it! So that's where I am, hoping to be a helpful, supportive presence to my daughter's family as they try to find answers and healing.

I don't have much to write about, nothing particularly enlightening. But the week before I left Iowa, I wrote four "cinquaines" for my poetry group, and I realized I could use them as a stop-gap measure for the blog until I get back. A cinquaine is a 5 line poem, with a certain number of syllables to each line: 2,4,6,8,2. It's a nice structure to help you write something. Often the night before my poetry group meeting on Wednesday mornings, I will set myself the task of writing a poem. This particular night, I couldn't think of anything. So I started by writing two syllables (one or two words) for the first line, and then see what came to me. The following cinquaines aren't particularly great, but they're a good example of how poetry emerges once you write a little bit, and follow the framework:


Drum beats

Stirring our feet,

Music engulfing us,

Bodies together in motion.

Rhythm.


Kitties,

Soft and cuddly.

They can be beguiling

Until they unearth your treasures.

Take care!


Quiet

A chance to Be

Pushing roots down and deep

Expanding outward and inward.

Peace.


Water

Freshens us all

Each life depends on it.

Raindrops are flowing toward rivers.

Deep wet.


Comments

  1. In fact, they ARE great!

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  2. Perfect, as usual, Nan, in that they grab my attention and make me wiser in my own personal translation. Thank you for that! I’m so glad you’re with your family and are able to give them the peace you bring with you. Thanks (to you for) Giving so many of us a richer life. Gina

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